“Soul-Inverse” chapters 1-3 rough draft!
This is still a very VERY rough draft. I have little notes to myself and random things throughout. There are grammar and punctuation mistakes so just ignore those.
Also all the photos are 100% drawn by me digitally. I used references for the body, but No Ai is used in the drawing of photos, or story at all. Just my mind and me. Don’t want to take credit for what isn’t there, but I want y'all to know I did it hand.
This is technically a “body swap” story but more in depth of how they swap to make sense to the world.
Chapter 1 - who are you?
*narrator*
-what makes a living creature unique? Is it your nature? Your body? Or even your soul?…… could two people with the same soul exist at the same time but in different dimensions?
If two people with different bodies yet the same soul coexist, could they be considered one being?
- We follow a hero of the people named Jake, he lives in the magical world, Aureum. (aka their earth. Fantasy world). Monsters rule the dark forests and underground areas. Not just that, they seep out into the towns and attack the citizens.. “Hero” is a title given to him. He didn’t get summoned from another world or given special powers. He lived to protect those who can’t do it themselves. He gained the name from a small town where he grew up and swears to protect.
*woosh*
Jake’s (can change) sword cuts the cloak and slashes through the air. Narrowly missing the fleeing man’s arm.
The cloak reflects off the man’s golden eyes.
“I can’t let you get away! You hurt the people I swore to protect! How could someone practice magic on another human like that? Do you have no soul?The people you hurt give me the power to rise up and be better than myself!”
The villain is mumbling but not speaking to the hero.
He clutches his sword and concentrates on recalling his magic.
A gust of wind bursts out of his feet, giving him a boost to slash through the back of the evil villain.
Blood flows through his mouth and splatters on the grass, he was dying yet mumbling still.
The ground beneath them hums.
*rumble rumble rumble*
Jake was still holding onto the sword that is purged into his back, he could run away from the rumbling but decided to stay thinking it was a trick.
“Arggg” more blood gushes out of his mouth, “if only i practiced using this body more!”
He reaches out his hand and touches the ground as it simply vanishes.
The ground beneath them, a circle about 3 meters wide simply vanishes. In the blink of an eye, a portal appears.
Gravity takes its place as they start to fall straight down into the portal.
Jake quickly reacts and tries to use his wind to jump out of it. His sword, still impaled in the man, won't come loose. He tugs but the gravity of the man’s body and the sword drags him into this undiscovered place.
As he passes fully through the portal, it shuts. Gravity flips as he falls to the ground.
His head immediately starts bursting with memories and visions.
His left eye sees the world in front of him, while his right eye sees something else. Something different.
Jake feels the soul of what feels like another in his head. It was him but not him. A different Jake.
The souls start to merge as his left eye viciously grows bright golden.
*he blinks and feels calm, he doesn’t want to open his eyes. After a couple seconds he does.
Now he’s one person, one soul. Whatever was happening was over.
Chapter 2 - Who am I?
*Jake opens his eyes*
Long lashes cover the eyesight for a split second as he tries to recalibrate his eyes.
There is nothing but darkness around him, a cavelike tunnel in front.
He tries to stand up but fumbles because of his new body weight.
He could feel something was different. No doubt it was “him” but not “him” at the same time.
Slowly he gains some composure and lifts himself up, feeling the new weight on his chest shift and swing.
His small hands grab the side of the wall as he shuffles forward.
About 5 meters forward there is a doorway, slowly he stumbles towards it.
*huff huff mhm*
Light feminine grunts slip out his mouth. Still having no control over the body.
*swing*
The door opens as he pushes on it. Revealing a room, a bed room.
There is a sink and mirror, he stumbles towards it
*SMACK*
He tightly thrashes his hands against it and pushes himself up.
A young woman, his exact age with short messy blonde hair held up in a bun. One eye was glowing golden while the other was glowing green. It was sharp, felt like it could cut through someone just by glancing.
*IMPORTANT*
Two worlds/dimensions lay parallel to each other yet inverse. Aureum(1) and Viridis(2).
Think about holding a quarter between your thumb and index finger. Your index finger lays on the head of the coin. This side represents the world Aureum.
Now your thumb lays on the tails side of the coin. This side represents the dimension Viridis.
The sides coexist together yet separate. They are Inverse of each other. It’s still the same coin
They share the same coin, just like how these dimensions share the same people and souls yet inverse of each other
- Jake is a hero to the townspeople. A kind hearted man who never took any reward money for his deeds. He loved his people and only wished the best for them. He protected them from villains and thieves who may harm the people.
-Evelyn - is a hero to the loyal monsters (mostly imps for now) who die for her. She is a monster herself, having snake like features in her hair, eyes, and tongue. (Think Gorgon) She used her minions for evil purposes and thinks they are suspendable. Queen of a small bunch of monsters and creatures in the underground/forest. She uses seduction and lust to gain control over those under her.
*VERY IMPORTANT*
They share the same soul yet are completely inverse to each other. Their nature, gender, motives.
When Jake fell through the portal to Viridis, the universe couldn’t let them coexist here. So their souls started to combine. Like a Yin Yang, they complete each other and combine. Leaving them one. One entity, one soul
Evelyn’s body with Jake’s mind.
Chapter 3. - I am me.
*editors note- from now on I will be referring to Jake as “her” and “Evelyn” because it’s her universe*
The sun shines through a hole, hitting the mirror. It reflects the image in front of her.
A girl, short messy blonde hair held up in a bun. Her hair alternates from light blond to dirty blond, like the stripes of a snake. Her tongue was spit at the tip. One eye glowing golden while the other was glowing deep green. It was sharp, felt like it could cut through someone just by glancing.
Shorter than his old body, but tallish for a woman.
The loose strap in her shirt slides off as it falls down, hanging around the waist.
*see pic*
Huge breasts sag under the weight of gravity as she bends forward. Swinging and swaying with every motion.
(Ahhha, fun to think he had a small dick which lead to his inverse having massive boobs)
Her hands slowly creep up her waist before slowly cupping the massive and Shapely breasts.
Gradually, she squeezes them.
“Mhmhm”
The same high pitched female voice grunts and moans.
“H-holy shit. Squishy like play dough….good thing this isn't reality. Obviously that “portal” I got sent through was an illusion and I’m stuck in it right now!”
Her hands deliberately slide to her throat, feeling the vibrations when she talks. Not used to hearing a feminine voice.
“H-helloo~~~ooo….”
Hearing her voice speak for the first time was exhilarating.
Her eyes finally glimmer down, now barely glowing, set in a permanent luminous state.
*BOOOOOOOM*
The ground shakes from above as dirt and rocks shake in the ceiling.
A high pitched yet groggy voice screams from afar. It slowly gets closer
“ahhhhhHHHH”
The sounds of small footsteps ring town the hall.
An Imp, around .7 meters tall yells while turning the corner into the room.
“Q-QUEEN EVELYN, MY QUEEEN. WERE UNDER ATTACK. IT'S THEM….. THE HEROS…..”
*clank*
The imp drops the small dagger he was carrying.
The noise finally knocked her out of her own mind as she darted her eyes to the small imp.
Evelyn’s shirt was still pulled down, revealing her breast for a split second before she hastily covered them with her fingers.
“I-I um…” she stumbles, not knowing what to say to this little creature.
Little pink lines, ribbon like streams through the air from the imp. Once hitting Evelyn, she felt stronger. A strange shadow like goo starts to slip out of her fingers subconsciously.
Evelyn didn’t know the power/ability used by this body.
“E-Evelyn?”
She points to herself.
“Me?”
The ink nodded his head.
“Queen Evelyn! Thanks for the show heheheh, but you have to battle! We are under attack!”
…….
“Shit shit shit shit shit”
I looked around the room and found an outfit on her amor stand, it seemed like a bit “much”. But right now I don't have a choice. It was a little tight and showed too much skin, it had weak spots.
*show picture*
I rummage around the rest of the room, finding an even more revealing suit! (The bunny suit is used LATER because of her undiscovered power)
*pic*
Reluctantly choosing the first option.
*thud tap thud tap thud tap*
As they run to the commotion, her thighs run together and her chest keeps bouncing. She puts her arm over the breasts, hoping to keep them from bouncing. She can’t help but blush.
A man stands above the ground, clenching his fist as Fire is summoned around it. He smashes his fist into the dirt beneath him destroying a huge chunk of the ground.
*WOOOOOOO~SH THUD*
A giant opening in the roof is caved in, rubble and flames falling from the sky. Most of the rubble was immediately burned up as the fire dissipated.
The imp guides her through dark halls as she sees sunlight start to shine above, and they get to a giant opening.
What seemed like a thousand small imps were screaming and scattering around.
There was a man ascending down with the fallen ceiling.
As he’s descending through the chasm, he nimbly slices through air a couple feet to the right of him. He kicked and destroyed a large piece of stone.
“EVELYN… today is the day I finally catch you!”
This so-called “hero” slams down on the ground in front of her. Short yet wavy brown hair, long torso, maybe even a sleeper build of muscles underneath his outfit. He had dark brown eyes, and right under the left eye was something that left Evelyn shocked……
*6 months earlier*
“Please hero, then the pendant was given to us by my dying mother. I have nothing without it.”
Jake puts his arm on the crying old man’s shoulder, “I promise. I will get it back!”
“But first I need you to tell me what they look like.”
The grandma wipes the tears away, “she was short and light brown hair, and *exceptionally* quick in her feet.”
With this description, the hero Jake set off to find her. After a day's travel to the mountains, he found her campsite.
“A traveling thief who visits new towns and steals whatever they can.”
The thief appears right behind Jake as he senses her and swings his sword.
*slash*
It barely made contact but enough to cut a scar underneath her RIGHT eye.
She rakes her finger and runs it against the blood dripping from the cut.
“This is the first time in years, no one has reacted quick enough to cut me. I’m Lyra and I found a worthy opponent.”
He points out his index finger, “give it back”. Motioning to the pendant around her neck.
*clank, woosh, ding*
The hero battles against the thief, clashing swords and magic power. An opening arrived when the thief was blown backwards from the impact of his wind magic.
He snatched the pendant from her neck and with a *YANK* pulled it off her neck.
The thief, realizing she couldn’t win, retreated far far away. They never saw each other again.
*present day*
This hero in front of her, had a scar that went horizontally across the face…. Under the left eye.
“N-no way…”
Evelyn stutters, she had seen that scar before….
“L-Lyra, I remember our battle! Tell me what’s going on! Why are you a man now! Did the same thing happen to you?”
The hero puts a foot forward, shocked by what she was saying he clumsily rolled his ankle by walking on some rubble that fell earlier.
“Ow ow ow.” Tears start to form in his eyes.
“OWIE, pause Evelyn, pause… let me get up.”
He tries to get up but falls back down to the ground holding his ankle, rolling around in pain as he cries.
Evelyn, not interested or understanding the situation, points at him furiously. Generating enough force to make her breasts sway from side to side.
“LYRA, when do you become a man??? And clumsy~???”
*20 seconds pass with no answer*
The hero starts to pull himself together and stand up, “I’m not Lyra, you know this…. Leo, we have fought countless battles against each other over the yea~…….”
Quickly a piece of the ceiling cut through the thin air right above us.
I simply put my hand up and punch it to rumble, (she must be strong 😉)
*BONK*
He's STILL trying to stand up when a piece of the ceiling falls on top of his head, smacking it and bringing him to the ground.
He began to roll around and sob more.
She pinches her arm through the clothes, “oh god I’m not dreaming…. I hope this is a dream…”
“Look, I just need to know if I gave you the scar, Mr, not Lyra.”
Evelyn covers her embarrassed face with her fingers, not being able to bear watching this anymore.
Completely ignoring this “alarming” situation unfold, her mind begins to wander.
“The scar I personally left behind is the same, just on the opposite eye. How could that be? I must have, no “Evelyn” must have given it to him. So in this alternate world or dimension thingy, some things are the same? Yet so different? Both events happen to where I gave this person a scar…. Are there events that happen in both reality simultaneously?”
Eventually yelling out, “ I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS AT ALL!!!!!”
2 figures quickly approach the opening made just moments ago, just then 2 more heros land on the ground next to Leo.
A tall girl, long and straight red hair reassures the injured Leo, “Backup has arrived!"
The other shadow next to them steps forward, a man, way smaller and shorter than Leo, but carrying a big hammer. “Yeah we’re here!”
Leo immediately looked around and dramatically said, “I was unable to defeat this monster once again. She grows strong and stronger every moment. You are truly a testament to the strength monsters have. Next time, I will return to defeat you!!!….. Also hey when did your left eye change colors? Is it like some magic trick or…. anyways, I WILL DEFEAT YOU!!!!!”
Evelyn looks around, completely dumbfounded by the situation. She didn’t even attack him the entire time.
They hastily picked Leo up from the ground, wrapping his arms around their shoulders and they all dashed into the air as one and far away.
Evelyn yells out, trying to get their attention before it’s too late.
“You didn’t answer my questions!!!!”
But it was too late.
“They must have used some kind of wind magic to jump that high, just like my old self….” Evelyn thinks out loud.
The sun beams into her face, lighting up her beautiful hair.
“So let me get this straight. I fall through a random portal or spell, my soul felt like it was being torn apart, seeing 2 different things at once. I wake up in ( gropes boobs lightly) THIS body. T-then these random people who I may or may not know break into here and humiliate themselves before running away…..”
A imp grabs my leg, “queeeeerren Evelyn, your sooooo strong!”.
All the imps calmed down and chimed in, “oh yeah my queen” “the strongest!” “I was ready to die for you, my queen!” “We love you”
I get overwhelmed by the amount of compliments, “u-uh yeah, thanks….”
She thinks, “I guess these little guys are loyal to her. I mean, me. They call me their queen. But I need answers and I need to think by myself.”
She pats the imp on the head and moves him off her leg.
Without saying anything, they start to form a line, passing rubble up the sides of the cave to the top.
An imp, taller and stronger than the rest, takes the rubbles once at the top and activates his magic. The pieces of dirt and rock shape and shift into a liquid like substance, as it fit into place and solidifies. They are fixing the roof without me saying anything.
Evelyn chimes in, “wow you guys are amazing.”
“Queen, is something wrong? We do this everytime! This is only the 7th time this month! Normally they attack more!”
The rest chime in “yeah” “yeah” “they are slowing down!”.





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